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  • “But ideas lie everywhere, like apples fallen and melting in the grass for lack of wayfaring strangers with an eye and a tongue for beauty, whether absurd, horrific, or genteel.”
    - Ray Bradbury
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A Story Is A Promise (How To Tell A Story)

Picture of a person writing a sentence and trees growing up from the ink.

Whether your story involves fiction or non-fiction it’s going to flop if the audience is falling asleep within the first few minutes. But how do you engage people right from the get go and compel them to care about what you have to say?

The most straightforward answers to that question I’ve ever seen is in a video by Bill Johnson. In it he talks about his idea that a story is a promise and how that promise can be used to guide the writer through the rest of the story.

He was inspired to that idea while reviewing manuscripts and realizing that many people were taking upwards of forty pages to get to the actual start of their stories.

The people were using the beginning of the story to just pile up facts about their main character or setting when they really should have been setting the story in motion.

He is talking about writing fiction books in the video but I think this idea can be applied to any media that involves storytelling. Whatever creative work you want to do: write books, blog, video editing, photography, painting, raising money for your favorite charity, interpretive dance, or even just telling stories to coworkers…if it has a story to it then this will help you do better.

Anyway, check the video out it’s really interesting:




Some key points:

  • As a storyteller it’s important to communicate what kind of journey your story has to offer.

  • The story should be set in motion around an issue that resonates with the audience so that the audience wants to go on the journey.

  • The opening paragraph should suggest that something’s at stake.

  • Keep in mind the difference between accumulating statements about your characters and setting the story in motion.

  • Once you have movement you have drama. If something’s not going anywhere there’s no reason to pay attention to it because it’s just standing still.

  • narrative tension: The transfer of tension from your character to the audience. Once the audience begins to care about your character then they are compelled to keep reading.

  • Plot creates resolution but story creates fulfillment.

  • Use your story’s promise to guide you as you write (or edit or paint or dance etc).

    For more on this check out his book ‘A Story Is A Promise‘.

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